Christa: Your approach is good. You use links to get the reader to the correct page, BUT when the reader arrives at a page, we find a lot of unlabeled pictures. You need to write about each picture to let the reader know what they are looking at. You say there are 8 regions, but show pictures of only 2. Christa, you need details - written.
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Christa:
A title page needs to have a title...JAPAN
Christa:
Your approach is good. You use links to get the reader to the correct page, BUT when the reader arrives at a page, we find a lot of unlabeled pictures. You need to write about each picture to let the reader know what they are looking at.
You say there are 8 regions, but show pictures of only 2.
Christa, you need details - written.
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